This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
These are 2 of my favourite sentences from my writing this week
1.Thump thump my soccer boots were destroying the grass while I was running.
2.I can feel the breeze hitting into my face while I was walking through a big crowd of people
